Chrono Break preview.
Before you submit your flash animations, you should watch them to make sure they work 100% correctly. Im not one to talk, but at least people can read what i have to say in my animation.
In most of the word bubbles, youd only read one line, and it would cut the rest off, that would be the first thing to work on.
the second, i know you dont want to hear it, is the sound. Sound is a major part of what makes an animation good, if the sound is bad, chances are the animation will get a bad rating. I know you couldent help it, but maybe try a different way of putting the sound in?
third was the actual animation itself. It was a little choppy, to be bland. Once again, i know mine wasent perfect, but it should be a little cleaner for a better animation. Some scenes chrono looks like he got out of a car smasher. I know it takes a long time, but the more effort the animation has, the better it will be overall.
I think you had a real good idea, it just needs to be worked on. Keep it up bro.
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